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Posted by john on February 14, 2003 at 23:52:22:

Hey there. made some words collide into each other and got the following two things. neither have a name yet so they will just be #1 and #2 for now


#1

waves crashing into the shore
blown by a cold and harsh wind
tearing at the beach
eroding its very substance

what is this ill wind

rolling clouds dark and malevolent
threaten and cry out
roiling the waves to fury
striking the earth with their might

what is this ill wind

#2

The clouds
blue and white fluffy clouds
full of life giving rain
unleashing their treasure on the green
The green
small green with small strong arms
that grab and hold fast to any surface they can
any crack, crevice, niche

The crack
a small crooked split where the green lives
a separation of the mortar between the blocks
the mortar that is struggling to remain. solid. whole. unbroken

The blocks
hard. cold. wet with rain.
laid on the ground. stacked one on another, higher and higher
a wall. a room. a castle

A castle
grand structure for the pride of men
built to shine. built to empower.
built to protect

To protect
protection lost... destroyed... gone...
castle turned ruin
blocks... scattered
the mortar brittle
cracks spread like veins

but the green...
the green is alive.
the green is covering the old memories
and being washed by the rain

sitting,
in the rain.
i cry the tears,
that can not be seen,
from the rain.



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