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Posted by PS on November 23, 2002 at 08:34:11:

In Reply to: Re: a poem.. posted by Mister Metal on November 20, 2002 at 09:40:51:

: : where
: : does
: : my
: : heart
: : belong

: : boom boom b o o m
: : crack craaack
: : smack

: : it, does break
: : into one million
: : bits of
: : bite sized
: : realities
: : of desire
: : of truths
: : of hungers
: : of melting,joys (stir simmer to blaze)

: : waiting
: : wondering
: : wandering
: : wishing
: : boom b o o m boom
: : my
: : senses
: : alive and quaking
: : divide (four direction) looking
: : for the
: : simple
: : life changing
: : life r e a r a n g ing
: : yes
: : where
: : does
: : my
: : heart
: : belong
: : when it
: : dosent want
: : to stay
: : in
: : me
: : a n y m o r e

: thats really hip...k here goes...this is what i call freestyle poetry..poetry from the top of the skull..yeah..its just free flowing..
: here i go..

:
: making my mark in this allotment called time
: _______________________________________________________
: this time...the cold ceramic floor in my home beckons me to wear warm raiment as
: the sound of grindcore greatness explodes from my cd player..napalm death surely own me..
: and here i am...thanking him for another day..
: for another chance...to be a friend...to work one more day...to love one more day..
: this day..its mine...this time...its what i do with it...my hands labor this day...as i work em
: to the bone..in hopes of making a gem out of my day....this time alloted to me...
: these 24 hours are so short..this life is so short...fathoming the days when i will look back
: all gray and shriveled...marveling at my days of youth..hoping to not regret the now..
: praying...hoping..doing my best...to make my mark..


These are both amazing. You all need to be archiving all this stuff (I know you are), but in a public forum where they can be accessed and read. I think I would like to have a basic html/web-building class in the spring so you two, and others, can build web pages for your poetry. Maybe be we could set up a computer in the church with a good WYSIWYG progran like Macromedia Dreamweaver or Adobe GoLive on it and people could schedule time to make web pages on it.





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