Posted by Fiiiyer on April 22, 2003 at 08:00:01:
In Reply to: WINDSWEPT SWANN AND STUDIOUS posted by giveawayboy on April 22, 2003 at 03:21:25:
That's really nice Bill. It evokes thoughts of desolate windswept plains with dried grass and purple skies...at least for me...
~N~
: WINDSWEPT SWANN AND STUDIOUS
: Did I aim low or did I not release,
: My fire or staff or seed or even goal?
: Was air too hot or conversation cold?
: Did breath not breathe or did my tongue offend?
: Did disconnection settle in like mold,
: Upon my inturned and encrusted crease?
: And did his everpresent presence end?
: To grasp was he not able? or to hold?
: And will his hand not take the time to mend,
: This broken conversation, this dark hole?
: This ever conscious waiting doesn't hold,
: For polished, varnished and untarnished piece.
: Bill 2003